Was this well played or could I have done something diffrently?

[twizzybop]

Well besides folding pre-flop is there any flaw? Should I have bet the turn or was the check/raise ok.. just want to know.. and ready to take critisizm(I know spelling).

Table: 1 (real money) Seat #1 is the dealer
Seat 1 - SWANGANDBANG ($1705 in chips)
Seat 2 - JUSTKAY ($1840 in chips)
Seat 3 - MIATAMAN ($1110 in chips)
Seat 4 - STOCKY2 ($3050 in chips)
Seat 6 - TWIZZYBOP ($1235 in chips)
Seat 7 - DELRIT ($1560 in chips)
Seat 8 - POKERMAN1977 ($2030 in chips)
JUSTKAY - Posts small blind $25
MIATAMAN - Posts big blind $50
*** POCKET CARDS ***
Dealt to TWIZZYBOP [Kd Js]
STOCKY2 - Folds
TWIZZYBOP - Calls $50
DELRIT - Calls $50
POKERMAN1977 - Folds
SWANGANDBANG - Folds
JUSTKAY - Calls $25
MIATAMAN - Checks
*** FLOP *** [4c Jh 5s]
JUSTKAY - Checks
MIATAMAN - Checks
TWIZZYBOP - Bets $200
DELRIT - Calls $200
JUSTKAY - Folds
MIATAMAN - Calls $200
*** TURN *** [4c Jh 5s] [Qc]
MIATAMAN - Checks
TWIZZYBOP - Checks
DELRIT - Bets $150
MIATAMAN - Calls $150
TWIZZYBOP - Raises $350 to $350
DELRIT - Folds
MIATAMAN - Calls $200
*** RIVER *** [4c Jh 5s Qc] [6h]
MIATAMAN - Checks
TWIZZYBOP - Bets $300
MIATAMAN - Folds
TWIZZYBOP - returned ($300) : not called
*** SHOW DOWN ***
TWIZZYBOP - Does not show
TWIZZYBOP Collects $1650 from main pot
*** SUMMARY ***
Total Pot($1650)
Board [4c Jh 5s Qc 6h]
Seat 1: SWANGANDBANG (dealer) Folded on the POCKET CARDS
Seat 2: JUSTKAY (small blind) Folded on the FLOP
Seat 3: MIATAMAN (big blind) Folded on the RIVER
Seat 4: STOCKY2 Folded on the POCKET CARDS
Seat 6: TWIZZYBOP collected Total ($1650) HI$1650) [Does not show]
Seat 7: DELRIT Folded on the TURN
Seat 8: POKERMAN1977 Folded on the POCKET CARDS

 

[F Paulsson]

Preflop: Raise. KJo is not a hand that likes company, so try to eliminate the drawing hands by raising.

Flop: Good bet.

Turn: Aggressive, potentially dangerous, but got the job done.

River: I'm not too happy about this bet. What did you think would happen when you bet 300? Would he fold a pair of queens?

 

[twizzybop]

Ty Paulsson..

I'm not too happy about this bet. What did you think would happen when you bet 300? Would he fold a pair of queens?

Fair enough but sorry to answer your question with a question.. but if I didn't bet wouldn't that be a sign of weakness after the bet on the flop then the re-raise on the turn?

 

[F Paulsson]

In position on the river when it's checked to you, weakness is not a concern. My point is that since it's unlikely he would have folded a pair of queens (or better) your bet had no value. If you had checked, you would have won the same amount anyway, so all your bet achieved was risking more of your chips in case he decided to checkraise you all-in.

That's why I'd advocate a check here. An argument could be made that you want him to pay for the privilege of finding out what hand you were holding, but I don't think that's a very strong reason. You could also have made a smaller value bet, one that would have been called with as little as ace-high, just to take some more of his chips.