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tothbopo

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This is my last hand from my last two tournaments, help me getting better, what do you think?

Freeroll Hold'em No Limit - Level XXI (3500/7000) - 2014/01/05 22:12:18 CET [ 2014/01/05 16:12:18 ET]
Bord '900366276 3229 ' 9 -max Knappen is worth Plads # 5
Plads 1: Seva60 ( 48042 I chips )
Plads 2: eltrickster1 ( 175458 I chips )
Plads 3 : Tothbopo ( 48.582 I chips )
Plads 4: RiseRock ( 126636 I chips )
Plads 5: harley219 ( 54162 I chips )
Plads 6: multiayf ( 73112 I chips )
Plads 7: pylusek111 ( 146.746 I chips )
Plads 8: suelo007 ( 360.907 I chips)
Plads 9 : novichok_38 ( 29778 I chips )
Seva60 : poster ante 700
eltrickster1 : poster ante 700
Tothbopo : poster ante 700
RiseRock : poster ante 700
harley219 : poster ante 700
multiayf : poster ante 700
pylusek111 : poster ante 700
suelo007 : poster ante 700
novichok_38 : poster ante 700
multiayf : poster small blind 3500
pylusek111 : poster big blind 7000
*** KORT ***
Givet to Tothbopo [ Ks Js ]
suelo007 : folder
novichok_38 : folder
Seva60 : folder
eltrickster1 : folder
Tothbopo : raiser 7000 to 14000
RiseRock : raiser 21000 to 35000
harley219 : folder
multiayf : folder
pylusek111 : folder
Tothbopo : raiser 12882 to 47882 and is all -in
RiseRock : Kalder 12882
*** FLOP *** [ 2d Ah 4c ]
*** TURN *** [ 2d Ah 4c ] [ 6d ]
*** RIVER *** [ 2d Ah 4c 6d ] [ 4d ]
*** SHOWDOWN ***
Tothbopo : shows [ Ks Js ] ( one pair fours )
RiseRock : shows [Ad 5s ] ( to pairs, aces and fours)
RiseRock vandt 112.564 from Potten
Tothbopo endte turneringen as nummer 416 out of 30,000 . And received $ 0,49 .
*** Cv ***
Pot i alt: 112.564 | Rake 0
Bord [ 2d Ah 4c 6d 4d ]
Plads 1: Seva60 foldede before flop ( bettede not )
Plads 2: eltrickster1 foldede before flop ( bettede not )
Plads 3 : Tothbopo showed [ Ks Js ] and tabte with one pair fours
Plads 4: RiseRock showed [ Ad 5s ] and vandt ( 112.564 ) with to pairs , Aces and fours
Plads 5: harley219 ( Knap ) foldede before flop ( bettede not )
Plads 6 : multiayf ( small blind ) foldede before flop
Plads 7: pylusek111 ( big blind ) foldede before flop
Plads 8: suelo007 foldede before flop ( bettede not )
Plads 9 : novichok_38 foldede before flop ( bettede not )

I think I had to do this as I was very shortstacked 3 BB and couldn't wait for a better hand.

The other one

Freeroll Hold'em No Limit - Level XVIII (2500/5000) - 2014/02/05 08:31:13 CET [ 2014/02/05 02:31:13 ET]
Bord '902267329 154 ' 9 -max Knappen is worth Plads # 1
Plads 1: Ziki 100% ( 38078 I chips)
Plads 2: Tandem323 ( 23127 I chips )
Plads 3 : pochicha ( 51976 I chips )
Plads 4: daniela_sti ( 7225 I chips )
Plads 5: krish436 ( 14511 I chips )
Plads 6: andrei197937 ( 43695 I chips )
Plads 7: Tothbopo ( 32948 I chips )
Plads 8: Marko431 ( 59345 I chips )
Ziki 100% : poster ante 500
Tandem323 : poster ante 500
pochicha : poster ante 500
daniela_sti : poster ante 500
krish436 : poster ante 500
andrei197937 : poster ante 500
Tothbopo : poster ante 500
Marko431 : poster ante 500
Tandem323 : poster small blind 2500
pochicha : poster big blind 5000
*** KORT ***
Givet to Tothbopo [As Kc ]
daniela_sti : Kalder 5000
krish436 : raiser 9011 to 14011 and is all -in
andrei197937 : folder
Tothbopo : raiser 18437 to 32448 and is all -in
Marko431 : folder
Ziki 100% : raiser 5130 to 37578 and is all -in
Tandem323 : folder
pochicha : folder
Daniela_sti : folder
Not Callet bet ( 5130 ) returned to the Ziki 100%
daniela_sti SIDDER Ude
*** FLOP *** [ 7d 9d 4c ]
*** TURN *** [ 7d 9d 4c ] [ Qd ]
*** RIVER *** [ 7d 9d 4c Qd ] [ 4d ]
*** SHOWDOWN ***
Tothbopo : shows [As Kc ] ( pair of fours )
Ziki 100% : that [ Td Ts ] (flush, queen high )
pochicha said , "4 7"
Ziki 100% vandt 36874 from side- Pot
krish436 : shows [ Ah 4h ] (three of a kind fours)
daniela_sti is Fil blev ikke fundet
Ziki 100% vandt 58533 from main- Pot
Tothbopo endte turneringen as nummer 62. . And received $ 0,07 .
krish436 endte turneringen which nummer 63. . and received $ 0,07 .
*** Cv ***
Pot i alt: . . 95407 Hoved - Pulje 58533 side- Pulje 36874 | Rake 0
Bord [ 7d 9d 4c Qd 4d ]
Plads 1 : Ziki 100% ( Knap ) showed [ Td Ts ] and vandt ( 95407 ) with a flush, queen high
Plads 2: Tandem323 ( small blind ) foldede before flop
Plads 3 : pochicha ( big blind ) foldede before flop
Plads 4: daniela_sti foldede before flop
Plads 5: krish436 showed [ Ah 4h ] and tabte with three of a kind fours
Plads 6: andrei197937 foldede before flop ( bettede not )
Plads 7: Tothbopo showed [As Kc ] and lost with a pair of fours
Plads 8: Marko431 foldede before flop ( bettede not )

Maybe this one I should have folded as I were in the game with more BB then the first one
 
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horizon12

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In both hand easy shove this very profitable , our stack less 10bb and play postflop very problematic..
 
rytciaq

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KJ. It looks nice, two picture cards, but it isn't that good of a hand. Trust me.Most of the time in this phase of the tournament KJ will be the losing hand pre-flop ( out-kicked or just beat). Shoving with KJ, even if suited, is really risky.

AK isn't a good hand for shoving, especially when not suited.
 
suby_rafael

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The first hand raise with with K J was loose, you should have waited for a better spot. The second one was played correctly with A K or atleast i would have done the same.
 
Arjonius

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Hand 1. It is normal to state your stack size in bb (big blinds) rather than BB (big bets). Your stack was 6.5 bb. With this stack size and the relative stacks,

I have no problem pushing KJs from MP. What I don't like is opening for less. Doing so encourages a multi-way pot. But you'd prefer either to win the blinds and antes or to get 1 caller. So simply open-shove.

Hand 2. Again, you have about 6.5bb. Snap-shove.

Btw, if you frequently blind down to a stack size of less than 10-12bb because you wait for premium hands, you're playing too tight.
 
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